Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Hummingbirds

hummingbirds blur
darting to scarlet blossoms
emerald wings flash


my contribution to the Tiny Pretty Things theme at http://onebreathpoetry.blogspot.com/

5 comments:

Roswila said...

Lovely! Nice contrasts of color, and clarity/blurring.

tumblewords said...

Nicely done! Hummingbirds are amazing!

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love hummingbirds, blur is so much the right word to describe their flight.

Plain Foolish said...

Oh, yes. One of the best things on our camping trip was to discover that our camp was close to two different hummingbird draws. We spent a morning in camp, just sipping tea and watching them.

I love the line "emerald wings flash".

Greggo said...

you've created a beautiful image here!