Thursday, September 14, 2006

Space Between


wind kisses my cheek
whispers secrets in my ear
bright pebbles on sand
river bubbles with laughter
sunlight dances with green leaves

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9 comments:

silverlight said...

Doesn't anyone read you? This is so elegant.

ian russell said...

perfect little details captured in your tanka, harmony. a truly beautiful piece.

kerrdelune said...

Gorgeous and so perfectly worded that I was standing right there with you!

Clare said...

I love this tanka.
Everything is said so perfectly, so amazingly.

lisrobbe said...

Elegant is correct.

Sandy said...

What a pleasant picture your tanka paints! Lovely.

AnnieElf said...

What a perfect and happy moment. Very soothing.

Sacred Suzie said...

Lovely, I adore the dancing leaves and the photograph is also so engaging in a poignant way.

paris parfait said...

Absolutely gorgeous tanka and photo - wonderful tribute to the joys of Mother Nature.